Monday, February 22, 2010

The Inseparable Us...



This poem was published on Feb 14 on Valentine's Day. There's a story behind it... ;)
I just loved it...

The moment I picked up my phone to message you,
It beeped, “I Miss You” you said to me…
My thoughts whispered, “Me Too”,
You answered, “Not More Than Me”,
I have realised lately, who you have become to me,
Suddenly the heart chirped in, now I am not me but ‘We’…
Gone are the days to secrete the emotions,
Time to give each other a realisation…
Never imagined ‘We’ could miss ‘Us’ so much,
Reminds urgently of the tender lovely touch…
When my heart skipped a beat in the morning,
Instantly I called you to know if you were leaving…
“Yes”, you said welling up my eyes with tear,
Plopping it out, my heart consoled, we are still near…
The day seemed like a mountain to climb,
Even work failed to make this feeling blind…
Though I know you would soon be back,
And life would run again on love-quarrel track…
Though the mind squeezed to think something new,
But eyes eyed on phone, it could be anytime ‘you’…
Thoughts dawdled from here to your moving train,
Where you peek out of window with me in your brain…
Couples moving on the road envied me to the lees,
Missing us together, our heart chirped again “say cheese”…
Never imagined to miss us so much,
The heart ciphered our feelings to give an inseparable notch…
Here we pray for thy eternal bliss, O’ heart,
As you are not his or mine, but ‘our’ part…

10 comments:

mystupendoussalvation said...

Hey Sexy Man!!

I can feel the flow of emotions...Can relate to each line and each word..

Something that is happening not there or here.. Its something happening between us..

There are no words in my dictionary like I and You, I have replaced them with a more beautiful word

WE

(P.S. - whats the hidden story? I guess after this Story should be written, so that readers can relate in a more better way)

Abhi said...

:)

Shreya said...

hmm.. i told you that day itself it really is good .. :)

Young Boy said...

kuch kaam ka likh jis se logo ka bhala ho

Rashmi... said...

@stupendous: thenx darling
@ abhi: :) :)
@shreya: thanx again
@ shut up Sumit, tune kuch aur pada hi nahi na jissey tera bhala ho

Anonymous said...

u cud not have got a better snap than this for ur poem

ankita said...

amazin!!!!

i know im late bt i wuld lik 2 know the story behind it n :-)

BTW Lovely...

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Abhi said...

again the same situation has came..that i have to read this thing and miss u more..

Rashmi Drolia said...

Aww..m so sorry :(